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Dear Tom,
P1：This is Li Ke from beijing.The reason that l am writing to you is because I  want to invitation you jion in our cycling trip on the next Sunday. Besides of that, here goes another thing that i think is important, which is this at next Sunday 8:00 am,we will assemble at our school gate and then we will cycling to beijing. There were five people on the cycling trip.  I konw you like chinese culture very much,As you kown,beijing is the capital city of China. there are many magnificent places to visit,such as the imperial places,the forbidden city and so on.
P2：Lastly, I believe you should know this at the very end of my letter, and that is you could jion in our cycling trip?
P3：I appreaciate your time for reading my letter and I am looking forward to your reply. I hope everything goes well with your life.
Li Ke

尊敬的汤姆：

我是来自北京的李克。我写信给你的原因是希望邀请你在下个星期天参加我们的骑行旅行。除此之外，有一件非常重要的事情需要告诉你，就是在下个星期天早上8点，我们将在学校门口集合，然后出发前往北京。此次骑行旅行共有五人参与。我知道你非常喜欢中国文化，而北京是中国的首都，有许多壮丽的地方可以参观，比如故宫、紫禁城等等。

最后，我想提醒你，在我的信的结尾处，请一定要知道你可以加入我们的骑行旅行。

感谢你抽出时间阅读我的来信，期待你的回复。祝你生活愉快！

李克