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    As people attach great importance to health，an increasing number of people are talking about important of exercise.Everyone has their own perference,some people like runing,some people like basketball.For me,l favorite is swimming.
   there are many benefits of exercising regular. I often to siwm after work everyday,because it not only help me keep health and improve my communication skills.I have made many friends who have same interset.we often to exercise together and become increasing healthy.
In conclusion,I strong decide you to exercise daily.right now,there is no better time.



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As people attach great importance to health, an increasing number of individuals are discussing the important role that exercise plays. Everyone has their own preference; some people prefer running, while others prefer basketball. As for me, I prefer swimming.

There are numerous benefits to regular exercise. I often go swimming after work every day because it not only helps me maintain my health but also improves my communication skills. I have made many friends who share my interests, and we often exercise together, becoming increasingly healthier as a result.

In conclusion, I strongly encourage you to exercise daily. There is no better time than now to start taking care of your health.

修改意见：
- 在第一句话中，“talking about”应改为“discussing”或“emphasizing”，更符合语境。
- 在第二段第一句话中，“to siwm”应改为“go swimming”。
- 在第二段第二句话中，“increasing”应改为“increasingly”。
- 最后一句话中，“I strong decide you to exercise daily”不太通顺，可以改为“我强烈建议您每天锻炼”。