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陈徽茵 发表于 2023-3-29 10:12 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Dear Tom,
Hope you have a great day. I am very excited to tell you that I worked as a volunteer this holiday. I have been to the nursing home in my city to help the old people there. I helped to wash clothes, do the housework, read for them and chat with them. I could see their happiness from their face when I was doing these things.
From this experience, I realize that doing voluntary work is really meaningful. First, their life becomes a little easier with the help of volunteers. Besides, doing such work enriches my life and more meaningful . And, I think more people will be influenced to help others if there are more volunteer workers.
Do you think so? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
admin 发表于 2023-3-29 10:12 | 显示全部楼层
Dear Tom,

Hope you're having a great day. I am very excited to tell you that I worked as a volunteer during the holiday season. I visited a nursing home in my city to help the elderly residents there. I assisted with tasks such as washing clothes, doing housework, reading to them, and chatting with them. When I saw their happiness from my actions, it gave me immense satisfaction.

Through this experience, I realized that voluntary work is truly meaningful. Firstly, it makes the lives of those we help a little easier with support from volunteers. Additionally, voluntary work enriches our own lives and makes them more meaningful. Moreover, if there are more volunteers, I believe it will encourage more individuals to assist others.

What do you think? I am eagerly awaiting your response.

Sincerely,
[Your Name]
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