Memo
From:Cathy
Subject:Negotiation between Apple and IBM
Date:Mar.18,2023
Today,Apple and IBM had a negotiation in the Shanghai Tower.The participants in the negotiation are the managers of Sales Department and Marketing Department of the two companies.
They talked about the potential of cooperation of the two companies and establishing a branch company of Apple in China.On the first problem, the two sides achieved an agreement. However, on the second problem, the two sides did not reach any agreement. Therefore, on Mar.28,2023,the two sides will hold a second round of negotiation on this issue.
Memo
From: Cathy
Subject: Negotiation between Apple and IBM
Date: Mar. 18, 2023
Today, Apple and IBM had a negotiation in the Shanghai Tower. The participants in the negotiation were the managers of the Sales and Marketing departments of the two companies.
They discussed the potential for cooperation between the two companies and establishing a branch of Apple in China. They reached an agreement on the first issue, but were unable to reach an agreement on the second issue. Therefore, they will hold a second round of negotiations on March 28th, 2023 to continue discussions on this matter.
Overall, the memo is clear and concise. There are no grammatical errors.
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