批改短文，是否有错误的地方

First of all,please allow me to say “thank you ”to you.It is very kind of you to spare your valuable time accompanying and entertaining me during the period of my vacation in Beijing.
That was my first time to visit Beijing,and I was unfamiliar with the city.Thank you very much for meeting me and seeing me off at the airport. Such experiences will be kept in my mind forever.Your help made me have a good and happy time.
It's the best season here. I would like to invite you to my hometown. I would be very glad if you could come.I am looking forward to hearing from you .

短文没有太大的错误，只有一处需要修改，将“here”改为“there”，因为文章中提到的是作者第一次去北京，而不是当前在北京。修改后的短文如下：

首先，请允许我对您说“谢谢”。您能在我度假期间抽出宝贵的时间陪伴和招待我，真的很感激。

那是我第一次去北京，对这座城市并不熟悉。非常感谢您在机场接送我。这些经历将永远留在我的心中。您的帮助让我度过了愉快的时光。

这里正是最好的季节。我想邀请您来我家乡。如果您能来，我会非常高兴。期待您的回复。