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Dear smiths:
I have learned from the advertisement that you want a tutor.  I would like you to consider me for the position.
I am very passionate about this job and I find my experience and strengths are well matched with your requirements. I get good grades in school and I have won several prizes in the contests.Besides, my English and Chinese proficiency are good so I can communicate fluently with the boy. I will be available at every weekends.
I would be very grateful if you give me the opportunity. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Wang Lin

Dear Smiths,

I have learned from the advertisement that you are looking for a tutor. I would like to be considered for the position.

I am very enthusiastic about this job and I believe my experience and strengths align well with your requirements. I have consistently received good grades in school, and I have won several prizes in contests. Additionally, I am proficient in both English and Chinese, so I can communicate fluently with your child. I will be available every weekend.

I would be grateful if you could give me the opportunity to work with your family. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Wang Lin

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