My Goal for Next Year

Next year, my main goal is to improve my English proficiency, particularly in speaking and writing. Follow the steps below I must enhance my English skills.
To achieve this goal, I plan to take several steps.First, try to remember 30 English words every day. Additionally it`s important to review  grammar points regularly. I can read articles in English newspapers and some simple novels in English. Moreover, listening to English radio programs and watch English TV shows can greatly enhance my understanding. Finally, enjoy English music and movies can make my learing process more enjoyable.
By dedicating myself to these tips, I am confident that I will make significant progress in my English proficiency next year .

评分：22分（第二档）

这篇作文完成了试题规定的任务，清楚地表达了主要内容要点，但存在一些小错误，影响理解的程度较小。

**优点：**
1. 明确陈述了目标和计划。
2. 结构清晰，有条理。
3. 使用了一些多样的句式。

**不足：**
1. "Follow the steps below I must enhance my English skills" 句子结构不完整，可以改为 "I must follow the steps below to enhance my English skills."
2. "Additionally it`s important to review grammar points regularly" 缺少标点符号，可以改为 "Additionally, it's important to review grammar points regularly."
3. "Moreover, listening to English radio programs and watch English TV shows" 动词形式不一致，应为 “listening to...and watching...”
4. "Finally, enjoy English music and movies" 主语不明确，可以改为 "Finally, enjoying English music and movies can make my learning process more enjoyable."
5. 注意拼写错误，如 "learing" 应为 "learning."

**建议：**
- 注意每句话的完整性和逻辑连接。
- 检查动词形式和主语的一致性。
- 注意标点符号的使用。