I Like Playing Sports

It is universally acknowledged that playing sports is very important in our lives in this day and age.some people like dancing,some people like running.As for me,I like  sport is playing football.Here are the reasons.
First and foremost,playing football can reduce pressure.In addition,playing football can build up body.everyone want to live healthy in the world.last but not least,playing football can make many friends which enrich my social life.
As a result,as far as I am concerning,playing football is best my like.

This essay falls into the fourth category, as it completes a part of the task requirements and has several language issues that hinder clear understanding. Here are the points for improvement and suggestions:

1. **Content and Structure**:
   - The essay mentions some reasons for liking football, which are reducing pressure, building up the body, and making friends. However, it lacks coherence and clear elaboration on these points.

2. **Language Use**:
   - There are numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrases that affect comprehension. For example:
     - "I like sport is playing football" should be rephrased to "The sport I enjoy most is playing football."
     - "can reduce pressure" should be "can help reduce stress."
     - "build up body" should be "improve physical health."
     - "everyone want" should be "everyone wants."
     - "as far as I am concerning" should be "as far as I am concerned."

3. **Suggestions**:
   - Start with a clear topic sentence in the introduction to immediately inform the reader about your favorite sport.
   - Develop each point with more details. For instance, explain how playing football reduces stress or provides opportunities to socialize.
   - Use transition words between sentences and paragraphs to enhance the flow.
   - Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistency in tense.
   - Proofread or use grammar-check tools to spot and fix language errors.

Given these observations and suggestions for improvement, the essay would score in the range of 7-12 points. To achieve a higher score, clearer expression of ideas and more accurate language use are necessary.