Fight against Haze

It is well known that clean air is very important in our lives. As the developing of society. Haze getting more and more serious. Fighting against Haze is very important, helpful and absolutely necessary. Here are the things we should do.
First of all, government should setting some laws protect environment. And appeal people pay more attention to Haze. In addition, Media should report more harmful about Haze. Actually, Haze is bad for us in many ways. Last but not least, we should plant more trees, because trees are good for environment,Which can help clean the air.
As a result, as far as I am concerned, fight against Haze is very important. helpful and absolutely necessary.

评分：

这篇文章得分：13-18分，属于第三档。

优点：
1. 主题明确，围绕“抗击雾霾”展开。
2. 提及了几项关键的措施，如政府立法和植树。

不足：
1. 语言表达存在多处语法错误，如“government should setting”应为“government should set”，“Media should report more harmful about Haze”应为“Media should report more about the harm of haze”。
2. 文章结构不够清晰，缺少总-分-总的逻辑。
3. 词汇使用比较单调，重复较多，可以增加一些多样性。
4. 对建议的解释不够深入，仅仅是简单列举。

建议：
1. 改进语法表达，多使用正确的动词形式。
2. 丰富词汇，用更多不同的表达方式。
3. 加强段落间的衔接，使文章结构更加清晰。
4. 对所列建议进行更详细的阐述，增强说服力。

例如，第一段可以加入关于雾霾影响的具体例子，加强引言部分。