Green Transportation

       Green transportation is very important in our lives.As a matter of fact,it is good for us in many ways.Some people like drive car,some people like public transport.As for me,I prefer public transport .
       First of all,green transportation gets me to know the world and helps me with my studies.In addition,it can save money for me,and it also very conveninence.Last but not least,public transport is good for environment,so we should choose it to reduce resourance waste and protect environment pollution.
       As a result,as far as I am concerned,I think of public transport is very important,helpful and absoluately necessary.

**评分：14分（第三档）**

**优点：**
1. 表达了绿色交通的重要性，并提到了一些关键要点，如环保和节约资源。
2. 使用了简单的语法结构，表达了观点。

**不足之处：**
1. 文章整体较为简短，缺乏深度分析和具体例证。
2. 存在一些语法错误，如“some people like drive car”应为“some people like to drive cars”。
3. 单词拼写错误，如“conveninence”应为“convenience”、“resourance”应为“resource”、“absoluately”应为“absolutely”。
4. 表达不够清晰，比如“help to protect environment pollution”应为“help to prevent environmental pollution”。

**建议：**
1. 提供更多具体例子和细节，来支持你的观点，例如如何使用公共交通能减少碳排放。
2. 注意语法的准确性，可以多使用从句丰富句式。
3. 增加对比，比如与私人汽车相比，公共交通有哪些特别的优势。
4. 检查拼写和用词，确保准确无误。