E-books or Paper books

     With the development of the internet,it is well known that book is very important in our lives.As a matter of fact,book is good for us in many ways.Some people like e-books,some people like paper books.As for me,I prefer e-books.Here are the reasons.
     First of all,e-books can save money for us,because paper-books are very expensive.In addition,e-books are very convenient to carry with,it not only brings us a lot of useful things,but also can make us to know the world.Last but not least,e-books are good for the environment.Peolple should choose e-books to reduce resource waste and environment pollution.
     As a result, as for as I am concerned,I prefer e-books.

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这篇作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，提及了关键内容要点，但语言运用和结构有一些不足之处。

1. 内容要点：文章提到了e-books的优势，包括节省金钱、方便携带以及环保。这些都是重要的内容要点，符合题目要求。
2. 语法结构和词汇：虽然句子结构和词汇基本能表达意思，但存在一些语法错误和表达不够准确的地方。例如：
   - "With the development of the internet, it is well known that book is very important in our lives." 这句话在逻辑上有些混乱，可以更明确地表述书籍的重要性。
   - "book is good for us in many ways." 应该是"books"。
   - "can make us to know the world" 应该是"can help us know the world"。
   - "eolple" 应该是"eople"。
   - "as for as I am concerned" 应该是"in my opinion"或"as far as I am concerned"。
3. 结构：文章结构基本清晰，有总论点和分论点，但可以在段落过渡和细节展开上做得更好。

改进建议：

1. 语言准确性：
   - “With the development of the internet, it is well known that books are very important in our lives.” 可以修改为 “With the development of the internet, it is well known that books play a crucial role in our lives.”
   - 将“book is good for us in many ways”改为“Books benefit us in many ways.”
   - 改正拼写错误“Peolple”为“People”
   - 将“can make us to know the world”改为“can help us understand the world better”
   - 使用正确表达“as for as I am concerned” 为 “as far as I am concerned”

2. 提高句子的多样性和复杂性：
   - 增加一些复合句和连接词，使文章更连贯。例如“Not only do e-books bring us a lot of useful information, but they also enable us to understand the world better.”

3. 增加具体例子和细节：
   - 提供一些具体的例子来支持你的观点，例如某些电子书的价格和纸质书的对比，说明如何减少环境污染等。

通过这些改进，可以进一步提高文章的质量，并更清晰准确地表达你的观点。