How to learn English well

Nowadays,speak English is very trendy and popular a matter.some people take about their how to learn English well,my mother recently ask me" do you have speak English,teach me,are you ok"SO,I give her some advice:
Firstly,you have learn English word in the morning very day.use free time to understand every word maining.Next,different word have different main,so you need understand it.Finally,I thought tell you that learn English is very important and need reading book very day.it not only helps your understand it but also helps your to use English speak.

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**总体印象与评分：**

这篇作文基本完成了试题规定的任务，但存在一些语言错误和不太恰当的表达。内容要点提及了一些，但表达上不够清晰，有些地方语法和词汇运用出现问题。

基于评分标准，可以将该作文归类到第三档（13-18分）。具体给分时，可偏向较低的一侧，因为语言错误较多，有些部分影响了理解。因此建议打分为 **14 分**。

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### 批改与建议：

#### 内容：
1. **结构**：文章的开头和结尾不够清晰，应该有一个明确的引言和总结。
2. **逻辑顺序**：应更合理地组织段落，使其连贯。

#### 语言：
1. **语法错误**：
   - 第一句应改为：Nowadays, speaking English is very trendy and popular.
   - “some people take about their how to learn English well” 应改为 “some people talk about how to learn English well”.
   - “my mother recently ask me” 应改为 “recently my mother asked me: ‘Do you speak English? Teach me, will you?’”
   - “you have learn English word in the morning very day” 应改为 “you should learn English words every morning.”
   - “use free time to understand every word maining” 应改为 “use your free time to understand the meaning of each word.”
   - “different word have different main” 应改为 “different words have different meanings.”
   - “Finally, I thought tell you that learn English is very important” 应改为 “Finally, I think it is important to tell you that learning English is very important.”
   - “need reading book very day” 应改为 “you need to read books every day.”
   - “helps your understand it but also helps your to use English speak” 应改为 “helps you understand it but also helps you use English to speak.”

2. **词汇使用**：
   - 提高词汇的准确性，例如 “maining” 应为 “meaning”。

3. **标点符号**：
   - "SO" 应改为 “so,”
   - 使用正确的标点符号，如逗号、句号等。

4. **拼写和格式**：
   - 注意拼写错误，如 “maining” 应为 “meaning”。

#### 改进后的版本：

1. How to Learn English Well
   
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3. Nowadays, speaking English is very trendy and popular. Some people talk about how to learn English well. Recently, my mother asked me, "Do you speak English? Teach me, will you?" So, I gave her some advice:
   
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5. Firstly, you should learn English words every morning. Use your free time to understand the meaning of each word. Next, remember that different words have different meanings, so it is important to understand them accurately. Finally, I think it is important to tell you that learning English is crucial. You need to read books every day. This not only helps you understand English better but also helps you speak it effectively.

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这样重写后的文章更符合语言习惯，表达更加清晰，语法也更正确。