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my favorit job
nowadays ,more and more people that job is very  very important in the lives.so i think that job is very very important,so,my favorit job is takeing a teacher.
the main reasons are lested as follows:
in the first place,my teacher thach me that understant word in the world.
in the second place,my teacher thach me that give me choose lives a ways
last but not the least,i like my teacher teache me many things,so when i was a little,i want to become   my teacher that teache my children.
as far as i am concerned,nowadays job is my favorite job.
to sum up,my favorite job is make a good teacher

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my favorite job

Nowadays, more and more people believe that a job is very important in their lives. Therefore, I think that a job is indeed crucial, and my favorite job is being a teacher.

The main reasons for this choice are listed as follows:

Firstly, my teachers help me understand the world around me.
Secondly, my teachers teach me to make choices in life.
Last but not least, I like it when my teachers impart knowledge to me, so when I was younger, I aspired to become a teacher myself to educate children.

As far as I am concerned, being a teacher is my favorite job nowadays.

In conclusion, my favorite job is becoming a good teacher.

**检查结果：**

1. "job is very very important" 应为 "a job is very important".
2. "takeing a teacher" 应为 "being a teacher".
3. "lested" 应为 "listed".
4. "thach" 应为 "teach".
5. "understant" 应为 "understand".
6. "word in the world" 可能应为 "words in the world" 或者重写为 "help me understand the world".
7. "give me choose lives a ways" 应为 "give me choices in life".
8. "teache my children" 应为 "teach my children".
9. "make a good teacher" 应为 "becoming a good teacher".