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An unforgettable Day
There are many  unforgettable days in China,such as the Spring Festival, the Qingming Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and National Day. Each festival has its own uniqueness. However, from my perspective,I think the Spring Festival is an unforgettable day rather than the others. It is the most interesting festival in China.

When I was little, I did not know how to celebrate the Spring Festival. My mum made new clothes and a lot of delicious food for us. After I grow up, I do the same thing for my boy as well. It is not only interesting, but also good for our family. It helps us to get closer with our family.

That is my  unforgettable day.

An unforgettable Day (短文批改)

There are many unforgettable days in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Qingming Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and National Day. Each festival has its own uniqueness, however, from my perspective, I think the Spring Festival is the most unforgettable day. It is the most interesting festival in China.

When I was little, I did not know how to celebrate the Spring Festival. My mum made new clothes and a lot of delicious food for us. After I grew up, I did the same thing for my son as well. It is not only interesting but also good for our family. It helps us to get closer to our family.

That is my unforgettable day.

修改意见：
1. 语法错误：将did not know 改为 did not know how。
2. 冗余表述：将“rather than the others”去掉。
3. 单词错误：将boy 改为 son。
4. 重复使用单词：将“It is” 改为 “This festival”，以避免过度使用相同的单词。

An unforgettable Day
There are many  unforgettable days in China,such as the Spring Festival, the Qingming Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival and National Day. Each festival has its own uniqueness. However, from my perspective, I think the Spring Festival is my unforgettable day. This festival is the most interesting festival in China.

When I was little, I did not know how to celebrate the Spring Festival. My mum made new clothes and a lot of delicious food for us. After I grow up, I do the same thing for my son as well. It is not only interesting, but also good for our family. It helps us to get closer with our family.

That is my  unforgettable day.
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An unforgettable Day

There are many unforgettable days in China, such as the Spring Festival, the Qingming Festival, the Mid-autumn Festival, and National Day. Each festival has its own uniqueness. However, from my perspective, I think the Spring Festival is the most unforgettable day. This festival is the most interesting festival in China.

When I was little, I did not know how to celebrate the Spring Festival. My mum made new clothes and a lot of delicious food for us. After I grew up, I did the same thing for my son as well. It is not only interesting but also good for our family. It helps us to get closer to our family. That is why the Spring Festival remains my unforgettable day.

修改意见：
1. 逗号的使用：在列表中应该使用逗号，将“such as the Spring Festival”与之前的内容分开。
2. 定冠词的使用：将“the Spring Festival is my unforgettable day”改为“the Spring Festival is the most unforgettable day”。
3. 动词过去式的使用：将“I grow up”改为“I grew up”。