请问如果这样写作文，最多能给几分，谢谢

My Dream Trip
With the rapid growth of the national economy,trips have become more and more popular.And my dream trip is going to the XiZang,because it is a really perfect place.
For one thing, XiZang has a bigger green land than other places. There are a lot of sheep and horses in this. You can ride a horse if you think. For another thing, XiZang has no pollution, the sky is blue and the air is so fresh. Last but not least, when you are feeling very hungry, local people will give you delicious food if you ask for help.
XiZang is a good place.I love  XiZang, because it is a beautiful place and these people will  help everyone.

这篇作文如果针对初中或者小学的话，可能会得到七八分左右。但是如果是针对高中或者大学，内容和语言表达方面可能还需要再提升一下才能得到较高的分数。