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宁宁 发表于 2023-4-14 11:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Dear Tom.
Hope you have a great day. I am writing this letter to invite you attend Lucy’s brithday party.
Please kindly find the following information for your reference:
Time: next Sunday
Address: in my home
We hope that nothing will prevent you from coming.
As we are looking forward to your visit, Be sure let us know the trip information so that we will pick you up at the station. Do you have any questions and concerns? If you have, do not hestiate to let me know.
I appreciate your time for reading my letter and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your Sincerely.
Lily
admin 发表于 2023-4-14 11:05 | 显示全部楼层
Dear Tom,

Hope you're having a great day. I am writing to invite you to Lucy's birthday party next Sunday at my home. Please find the details below:

Date: Next Sunday
Time: TBD
Location: My home

We truly hope that you'll be able to make it to the party. As we're eagerly awaiting your visit, please let us know your travel plans so we can pick you up from the station.

If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to let me know. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
Lily

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1.将“please kindly” 改为 “please”
2. 在地址后面加上 "Location"
3. 在日期后面加上 "TBD" 表示时间待定
4. 调整语言表述,让信件更通顺易懂
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