Dear Tom,
Hope you're having a great day. I am writing to invite you to Lucy's birthday party next Sunday at my home. Please find the details below:
Date: Next Sunday
Time: TBD
Location: My home
We truly hope that you'll be able to make it to the party. As we're eagerly awaiting your visit, please let us know your travel plans so we can pick you up from the station.
If you have any questions or concerns, please don't hesitate to let me know. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Lily
批改说明:
1.将“please kindly” 改为 “please”
2. 在地址后面加上 "Location"
3. 在日期后面加上 "TBD" 表示时间待定
4. 调整语言表述,让信件更通顺易懂 |