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51.请根据所提供材料中的要求完成一篇100词左右的英语短文。并将短文写在答题纸相应的位置上。
1.回忆值得记忆的一天；
2．说明为什么值得记忆。
In recently, more and more people are talking about what did we memorize a worth day. From my perspective, it is totally that is Chinese New Year. The reasons why I mention you so are listed as below.
The first point that I mention to you that you can have a good time, it is because in the day all families would be together to celebrate Chinese New Year. In addition, in the day families would do some food, it is so yummy that I never fail to be attracted to it, which leaves a deep impression on me.
From I mention above, it is easily to inclusion that Chinese New Year is the day. I like the day and have a lot of benefit from it.
作文批改评分

作文评分：50分（共100分）
评价：
1. 语法错误较多，需要加强语法基础练习。比如句子结构、主谓一致等。
2. 逻辑不够清晰，需要更好的组织思路来表达自己的观点。比如第二段陈述的理由不够充分，需要举例详细说明。
3. 等级较低的词汇的使用较多，需要提高词汇水平，比如可以使用一些高级词汇或者短语来增强文章的表现力。