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                       Spring Is Coming
In this day spring will coming.It's my favorite season.Because i think the spring is green.When the spring come,i  can see flowers have some color.Look, some little trees are grow and grow.They make happily with me.When the spring rain come,I like look outside and sit down the room.Also like listen to the rain or with it go to sleep if it come later.I think it make me be relax.
         In the spring, some people play with friends, they go to the park. Others while go to shopping.Sunday,We can see some people rain long time on the road.They look health and hardly.But i think they are really happy because they are faith. It's right and the eyes  are light.And in the spring we can go to swim,The water not cool. Is warm  than  winter.How great it!
           Are you ready enjoy the spring?

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Spring is coming! It's my favorite season because I think it is so green. When spring arrives, I can see flowers blooming with color. Look, little trees are growing and growing, making me so happy. When the spring rain comes, I love to look outside and sit in my room. I also like to listen to the rain or go to sleep if it comes later. I think it helps me relax.

During spring, some people play with their friends and go to the park. Others go shopping. On Sundays, we can see some people walking on the road for a long time. They look healthy and happy because they have faith. Their eyes are bright. In spring, we can even go swimming since the water is warmer than in winter. How great is that!

Are you ready to enjoy the spring?

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