my hobby

How do you spend your spare time? With the development of economy and society, people now enjoy their lives in different ways during their spare time. For me, I enjoy reading books, listening to music, dancing and so on.
Now I would like to share one of my hobbies with you. I prefer doing yoga more. There are some reasons listed below: first of all, doing yoga helps me relax after daily hard work and keeps me fit. I usually spend an hour doing it regularly during my spare time, which not only can build up my body but also make me refreshed. Secondly, it is a great way for me to make new friends with the same interests when I go to doing yoga.
All in all, I love doing yoga so much in my spare time.
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随着经济和社会的发展，人们现在在业余时间享受生活的方式各不相同。对我来说，我喜欢阅读书籍、听音乐、跳舞等等。现在我想分享我的其中一个爱好——瑜伽。以下是一些原因：首先，做瑜伽能够帮助我在一天忙碌的工作后放松身心，保持身体健康。我通常会定期花一小时做瑜伽，这不仅可以锻炼我的身体，还能让我感到清爽。其次，当我去做瑜伽的时候，这是一个结交志同道合的新朋友的好方法。

总而言之，在我的业余时间里，我非常喜欢做瑜伽。

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With the development of economy and society, people now enjoy their lives in different ways during their spare time. For me, I love reading books, listening to music, dancing, and so on. Now I would like to share one of my hobbies with you - practicing yoga. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, doing yoga helps me relax after a hard day's work and keeps me fit. I usually spend an hour regularly doing it during my spare time, which not only builds up my body but also refreshes me. Secondly, it is a great way for me to make new friends with the same interests when I go to practice yoga. Overall, I really enjoy practicing yoga in my spare time.