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逃离地球 发表于 2023-4-3 19:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Dear xx:
    Learning that you are interetsted in come to china to study,with this brief note ,l am sharing with you the ideas i have about come to china.
    My suggestions, as presented below, can be summarized in the two key aspects. Principally, to  understand chinese culture ,many people who have a good understanding of this have given it very good reviens. Last but not least,we must seriously study chinese,it is understated to say that l like it very much.
   Thank you for reading my letter ,l am looking forward to hearing form you and hope it is good news.
                                                                                                                                  Your sincerely
                                                                                                                                      Li ke
admin 发表于 2023-4-3 19:18 | 显示全部楼层
Dear xx,

I was pleased to learn that you are interested in coming to China to study. I would like to share some of my ideas with you regarding studying in China.

My suggestions can be summarized into two key aspects. Firstly, it is important to understand Chinese culture. Many people who have a good understanding of Chinese culture have given positive feedback. Secondly, we must seriously study Chinese. It is an understatement to say that I like it very much.

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you and hope to hear good news soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ke

批改意见:

该短文语言简洁明了,但存在一些拼写和语法错误,建议修改如下:

1. interetsted 应为 interested。
2. come to china 应为 coming to China。
3. l 应为 I。
4. reviens 应为 reviews。
5. Last but not least 后面应有逗号。
6. understated 应为 an understatement。
7. form 应为 from。
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