短文批改

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  In recent years, we have to face a problem of haze. Which is becoming more and more serious.It can lead to environmental and healthy risk, which may cause illness,such as cancer.
  In the face of haze, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, it terms of  behaviors, government should make some laws and shut down heavy-pollution factories to reduce environmental pollution and control haze. For another thing, it terms of public behaviors, people should choose green transportation to reduce greenhouse gas emissions to control haze, such as walking, bicycling,public transport, and so on. Finally, it terms of personal behaviors, we should start from the little things around us ,and we can plant more trees ,because trees can clean the air
  This measures are necessary to fight against haze, I am confident have a bright future if all of as take action from this moment

开始。
批改如下：

近年来，我们面临雾霾问题，这一问题变得越来越严重。它会带来环境和健康风险，可能导致疾病，比如癌症。

面对雾霾，我们应该采取一系列有效措施来应对这种情况。一方面，在行为方面，政府应该出台一些法律，关停高污染的工厂，以减少环境污染和控制雾霾。另一方面，在公众行为方面，人们应该选择绿色交通方式，以减少温室气体排放，控制雾霾，比如步行、骑自行车、乘坐公共交通等。最后，在个人行为方面，我们应该从身边的小事做起，可以多种一些树，因为树能够净化空气。

这些措施对于对抗雾霾是必要的，我相信如果我们所有人从现在开始采取行动，就会有一个光明的未来。

批改意见：

1. 第一句话中，“we have to face a problem of haze”应该改为“we are facing a problem of haze”。

2. 第二句话中，“It can lead to environmental and healthy risk”应该改为“It can pose environmental and health risks”。

3. 第三句话中，“For one thing, it terms of behaviors”中的“terms of”应该改为“in terms of”；“shut down”后面应该加上主语，比如“the government should shut down”。

4. 第四句话中，“For another thing, it terms of public behaviors”同样需要在“terms of”前面加上“in”，并且“greenhouse gas emissions”中的“gas”应该改为“gases”。

5. 第五句话中，“Finally, it terms of personal behaviors”同样需要在“terms of”前面加上“in”，并且“we should start from the little things around us”这个表达不太恰当，可以改为“we can start from small actions around us”。

6. 最后一句话中，“如果所有人从现在开始采取行动”应该改为“如果我们所有人从现在开始采取行动”。“have a bright future”这个表达也不太恰当，可以改为“will have a brighter future”。