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I heard that you will visit my hometown next week, so I am writing this email to introduce the weather in my home town and give you some suggestions. First of all, it is going to be sunny next week in my hometown, so you can bring some light and comfortable clothes with you. In addition, there many interesting places in my hometown, you can spend two or three days visiting the sights. Also ,there are many types of food to try in my hometown, you can enjoy a lot of delicious dishes. Last but not least, it is important to be safe, you should take care of your belongings and use official transport.

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I heard that you will be visiting my hometown next week, so I am writing this email to introduce the weather in my hometown and give you some suggestions. First of all, it is going to be sunny next week in my hometown, so you can bring some light and comfortable clothes with you. Additionally, there are many interesting places in my hometown, and you can spend two or three days visiting the sights. Moreover, there are many delicious dishes to try in my hometown. Lastly, it is essential to stay safe during your trip. Please take care of your belongings and use official transportation.