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陈徽茵 发表于 2023-3-29 09:49 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have learned from the information that your team is recruiting members .I would like you to consider me for the position.
As a college student,I am very passionate about this activities ,which makes me full of energy .
I am eager to become a member of your team and improve my practical skills. I know there are some requirements, but I don't know the details. Do I need any qualifications? If so, what qualifications should I have? I also heard that the team will hold various activities. Could you tell me more details? I will be available at every weekends.
I would be very grateful if you give me the opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you .
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
admin 发表于 2023-3-29 09:49 | 显示全部楼层
Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned from your information that your team is recruiting members. I would like to be considered for the position.

As a college student, I am very passionate about these activities, which makes me full of energy. I am eager to become a member of your team and improve my practical skills. I know there are some requirements, but I don't know the details. Do I need any qualifications? If so, what qualifications should I have? I also heard that the team will hold various activities. Could you tell me more details? I will be available every weekend.

I would be grateful if you could give me this opportunity. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

There is only one small error in this short text. In the second sentence, "from the information" should be changed to "from your information."
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